Tuesday, December 29, 2009

The Invisible Soldiers

The Invisible soldier
by Asil
             Long long ago ,when Pharaohs were still lead Egypt, and when Egypt was still leaded by pharaohs, and when our fair pharaoh was introducing to death, surrounded by his two princes and their wives and whole the royal court, with interrupted voice the old pharaoh began to speak in his royal bed "Ooh ,here I am, upcoming to die, and I think it's never too late to announce the upcoming pharaoh for Egypt" the two pharaohs opened their eyes eagerly as their father finished his say, the elder prince cut the silence saying in a naïve voice "you will stay our leader and captain" the younger resumed his brother's lies "we don't care who will be the pharaoh we will stick up fo….." "SSSSSHHHH" the old pharaoh interrupted his son's talking "let me finish my last few sentences then speak as much as you can" he took a deep breath and continued "both you will take Egypt, each one will take the half, One take northern kingdom and the other take southern kingdom" their naïve smile vanished and they open their eyes unbelieving "But you have to swear in front of me if I was still alive and in front of whole Egypt that you won't ever fight which means that no one will injure his brother by his weapon in a fated battle or else…." He calmed for a moment "you won't ever lead Egypt and get down from the royal chairs for ever", the elder prince could not bear any more he stood up angrily and yelled "you can't do this, are you serious?" his father didn't reply and that made his craziness much crude "Damn, are you serious?" he turned round to face his father to see him star in the empty air, and his royal bed was the first witness on his sudden death to discover that all what he was yelling and screaming aiming to do was in vain, Pharaoh was died.
               ."He left for us a reason to stay cursing him all along our life time" said the younger pharaoh while he was checking on his pure, precious, jewel on his golden ring "everything is off, his plane was resorted us to swear in front of all Egypt" Said the elder as he was rolling in the royal room ,Both them wanted to fight to gain the loser's gold and to be the real Pharaoh for whole Egypt not just a half, they thought a lot and they gathered all their philosophers and thinkers to find a solution and they did, it must be a battle without any blood ,it must be a fight with no boxes ,and if must depend on Intelligence and courage, together they found some sort of wars called….
Chess :
                .among whole Egypt the two pharaohs sat around the chess table on a stage, the younger prince was remembering and thinking about his cunning trick, like a flashback ,back to the past when he was setting and one of his thinkers approached and told him that he would make him win ,so easy the best trick for the weaker military makes it win, he gave him in a cheesy hand a wooden chess soldier covered by a chemical material made it hidden, chanted one!, when he tell the phrases it was viewed, back to present, as they began to move their soldiers ,elephants and horses ,and one by another was thrown as the game was upcoming to end as it was increasing much difficulty, till the younger pharaoh finally told the phrases the invisible soldier was viewed, at that time the younger pharaoh hit the elder's ding by the chanted soldier announcing the end of the untouched war by the younger victory, but the elder felt with some unstable, uncomfortable thing in the game he felt with some cunning and trickery, he counted his brother's soldiers and he found them nine ,he stood up angrily and grab his brother's crown and yelled at him that it must be a reasonable explaining for that, the younger pushed him in his chest shouting that the game was up and he won.
 by the people's roars and semi-fighting and the two pharaohs' grabbing the two people began to fight with floods of blood full the ground and fights oll over the hall
. And from afar the elder pharaoh's minister and the younger's thinker were watching with a cunning smile ,the thinker belt down on the minister's ear on his chair and whispered "shall you give me what you have promised me,your majesty!?"
He smiled more and said "And more my faithful servant" and  repeated
"And more"!!!!.

 The southern kingdom and the northern kingdom were the two halves of the ancient Egypt, the capital of the first was Nakhb and the capital of the second was Boto, and that caused a lot of troubles like the weakness in defeating the enemies, some pharaoh of the northern united them in 4242 B.C. but they were separated again then pharaoh Mina from the southern, from Tiba (Oksor now) united them again in 3200 B.C. in one country,And by the way it's not a real story,Chess was invented in the 6th century in India.
Asil Saad,


Thursday, December 10, 2009

The forbidden door

This tale which I'm going to mesmerize was a dream I dreamed it once, Although that we never feel those fantasy moves in dreams ,I was so terrified and scared ,I want you to Imagine with me how hilarious was this dream -or I must say a nightmare-just feel it! ,But I want you to realize that there is nothing true, furthermore ,In this tale I have a younger sister, while I have not! ,In this tale we are living on the roof of our building which we are not, All the matter is just some confusing game!
By Asil

.Hi I'm Asil ,I still live in Egypt and I'm still having the same bedroom, But with a weird ,strange door!
the door which is contact the room with the roof directly ,but this door was forbidden, It wasn't allowed to open it or even to approach ,Why?...I didn't know, nobody knew ,just some threatens from my parents to stay afar ,But after 14 years I was still carious ,I was still wanting to know what was hidden behind that old well-scarred door ,I approached ,But I remembered all the stories about this door ,about the ghosts which was behind it and the murderer spirits ,But Noo, the time was come to know the unknown, I feel it with my fingers, it seemed so fragile ,I prepared myself to hit it with my fest, CRAASSH, the wooden door was broken to explore another iron door behind it, as a consequence ,it fall down with a strong metallic sound, I pulled my hand fast ,to see the most deep injure ,first I thought it was just an Injure made by the broken door, But when I watched much carefully I saw it, with no mistake, It was a Copra's sting ,And it spread all it's poison liquid within my hand too.!!!!!!!???
The unknown:
.after a minute the sting was aid ,It's a dream...right? ,I backed the room again cursing this door which was like a gate of hell , But instead I found what? ..Imagine with me, my young sister was holding a lot of brown and yellow wet balls, and told me happily "Asil!, see I bring a chain for you!" ,I felt it, it was like…
Like eggs, Eggs I didn't know it's sex, but I was scared ,I snatched the eggs directly from her hand, and carry it till I reached the kitchen, then I put them in the fridge ,I breath deeply ,I was assumed that would prevent them from completing their growth system in their eggs, But suddenly I remembered some hilarious details were stuck me back for two meters "the eggs which I was held was just yellow ,where are the brown ones?" I shouted ,and this sort of acknowledge was enough to stunned me.
The forbidden door, the terrified night, the screaming within me, it was Impossible to expect that there were people still asleep among all that grooming ,it was an exceptional night, I turned around and I saw one brown egg cracking, craaaaaaaaack, I didn't even want to watch.
I saw it, just like a warm, but it was green, I inspected a small eagle was revolving around in the apartment-don't forget that it's a dream- I felt comfortable as I assumed that the eagle would eat the strange green warm ,But imagine what?
The warm's tongue longed to reach the flying eagle and eat it directly, it was a wild strange warm I ignore it's sex, this was a problem, but to eat an eagle which was meaning that it lives on meet, this was a trouble ,to notice that there were some changes happing and few physical systems took place on your table this was a disaster.
The creature:
Ooh, what a fast change, the little warm was changed into a small crocodile with two heads and it was still growing.
I screamed ,that was all I can do.
I will wake up all the family to search with me for the lost eggs, what did I do?, It was a forbidden door as I was foolish to try to open it. I seemed had opened a gate of Hell. Why do I never follow the rules and laws?
This dream was a hilarious and terrifying experience for me ,I saw finally one result of my irresponsibility and unwariness which I've always behaving , but this after all was a dream as my first result in real life when my new mobile phone fall over my wide open pocket while I was walking uncared , this was the big hit.